Wednesday, January 30, 2013

The Queen's Burden - Opening Scene

This is the opening scene of a fantasy screenplay that I wrote. I still have some editing and revising to do before I'm fully finished. This may not be reproduced without the author's permission.


EXT. CENTER OF AMELIA’S CAMP – DAY

 

Two swords clash together as sparks fly upon first impact. Zoom out as two armored figures sidestep each other and trade another series of blows at each other. The first fighter is slightly thinner than the other but the fighter’s overall physical appearance is otherwise obscured by chainmail armor and a helm. The other figure has more bulk and is taller by a scant couple inches. This figure wears heavier armor and no helm but is clearly a young man as evidenced by the short brown hair and burly build.

 

The two trade more blows. The thinner, helmed opponent throws its sword down onto the male figure in a flurry of blows. The male fighter remains steady and deflects each blow without losing his footing.

 

The larger male opponent is now on the offensive. He pushes forward, thrusting and swinging his sword forward repeatedly with less speed but more power and focused force than his thinner opponent. The opponent parries the blows repeatedly and the two end up grappling with their swords pressing against each other.

 

The male fighter grits his teeth with exertion while attempting to break the grapple. He smiles through his teeth at his opponent.

JASUN

Must you always wear the helm while training, Amelia?

 

The other fighter shoves him back with a grunt. The fighter removes the helm and tosses it to the side. Underneath is a stern-faced, muscular, yet fairly attractive young woman in her early twenties, about equal age to the male opponent. Her blond hair is somewhat short save for the pony tail that her hair is tied back into. Her face is moderately dirty and sweaty from the recent training bouts. Her striking blue eyes glare back at the male opponent.

 

She makes a motion to her pony tail with the tip of her sword.

 

AMELIA

I don’t want you having something to grab onto during the fight, Jasun.


 

She falls back into a battle stance, readying her sword before her.

AMELIA

But I’ll give you the chance just this once. Gods know you won’t be able to win without it.

 

Jasun chuckles and falls into the same side-faced ready stance that she has.

 

JASUN

I’ll not dishonor myself by pulling your hair. But I do plan on beating you.

 

Amelia attacks, thrusting her sword forward and swinging it around in an arc. Jasun ducks to avoid the swing and arises to his feet to slash at her. Amelia deflects and unleashes another series of quick jabs and slashes, which Jasun deflects before he attacks back. Amelia’s attacks are faster and more chaotic while Jasun’s are steadier and more powerful.

 

The attacks end briefly when Jasun gets a lock onto Amelia’s sword arm and spins her around, pulling her in toward him with the sword pressed slightly up against her neck. He smirks and she gives a mock scowl.

 

JASUN

              Yield, Your Majesty?

 

She relaxes against his chest. Bringing a finger up, she slowly runs it from his arm up to the surface of his blade in a sensual, delicate manner.

 

AMELIA

              Only when I’m dead.

 

She kicks her head back, knocking him back and breaking his hold on her. She then kicks him in the groin, causing him to grunt and stagger backwards, before she makes advances on him again, slashing at him with her sword. She drives forward again and takes his feet out from under him, causing Jasun to fall onto his back.

 

Jasun smirks up at her while panting, out of breath. She looks down at him with raised eyebrows, pointing her sword down at his chest.

 

AMELIA

As your Queen, I could order you to yield. But I doubt you’d listen to me anyway.

 

Jasun shakes his head. He bats away at her sword playfully.

 

JASUN

No I would not. And besides, you haven’t beaten me.

 

AMELIA

              Oh no? Your ass on the ground says otherwise.

 

JASUN

We agreed that victory goes to the fighter who makes the first cut.

 

Amelia kneels down over him. She brings the tip of her sword down to his face as he shirks slightly away from it. With a quick slash, she severs a curly brown lock of hair from above his forehead but his face is otherwise left unharmed.

 

AMELIA

              There. One cut. You’re beaten now.

 

She grins, sheathing her sword. She reaches a hand down to help him up.

 

JASUN

              And so I am.

 

He accepts her hand and boosts himself up onto his feet. Both of them glare around the small training field. Other armed soldiers lean on their weapons or shields and watch their exchange with interest. Amelia turns back to Jasun.

 

AMELIA

              We’ll be planning the next raid at dusk.

 

Jasun nods, beginning to loosen his armor and take off the components piece by piece.

 

JASUN

              You know I’ll be there.

 

Amelia nods and begins to leave the training field to go off further into camp. In the distance, the sounds of blacksmith’s hammers clanging, battle preparation and men’s laughter resonate through the camp.

 

Jasun glances around the field so see one or two soldiers laughing at his expense at Amelia having beaten him.

 

Amelia looks over her shoulder.


AMELIA

              And Jasun?

 

He looks back at her as he was in the process of removing his armored greaves.

 

AMELIA

If you ever let me win again, I’ll take an entire head of hair next time.

 

Amelia exits. Jasun rolls his eyes and shakes his head while continuing to unstrap his armor.

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